loss

25 June 2006 at 10:29 pm (1970, 2000, Poetry, Undated)

on on
through the pale
	plastered
		dawn
the morningsickness sun
hidden

and i
in my pale
	impaled up
		on
the wail of a twisted tone
ridden

(revised 05/27/00)
[renamed anguish]

on on through the paleplastered dawn
the morningsickness sun hidden
and i in my pale impaled upon
the wail of a twisted tone ridden

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  1. Jonathan (son #3)'s avatar

    Jonathan (son #3) said,

    Another version of this appears, on p. 74, of the steno notebook labeled “The Shadow Box,” essentially the same, but with more standard line breaks:

    on on
    through the paleplastered dawn
    the morningsickness sun
    hidden

    and i in my pale impaled
    upon the wail of a twisted tone
    ridden

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